This might also be a project that needs more time because it has big concepts. It might be I put this down for November's NaNoWriMo to write a sequel to The End of the World Sucks and then stay working on Sucks II before picking Neferseshotep back up after it's sat for a while.
I have caught little errors as I'm writing now - but NaNo's about the writing, not the editing and rewriting - so I might be feeling a little down for not conceiving of all logistical problems as I wrote the initial draft. How could I flood New York City and forget to turn the electricity off?
The other night I was trying to spell out some basic themes in the book - it's not just a bunch of people get together and set off on advenure (but that does help it keep moving).
If I just gave them some superpowers and problems they handled easily, that's boring.
I recall the Ancient Greeks gave their gods weaknesses and stories to make them human-like, but their problems were so much bigger. Scooping cat litter - that's nothing, you hear about Hercules and those stables?
I am also revisting a theme from Sucks. Everybody knows the difference between wrong and right, but what if the other guy's right is different than yours? Vanna can't kick anything's ass, so the similarity stops there. Here, as with Spiderman, with Great Power comes Great Responsibility - what is that responsibility? The huge hint is all the central characters in Neferseshotep have something to do with death - death happens, people die all the time. Would any of them feel inclined to save someone's life? Do they even value their own lives? And with a Valkyrie, if you're of the Norse persuasion, the end of the world is one great big fight that we're going to lose - woo hoo!
There's also the issues of belief, not believing, and also conflict regarding that. Then there's the possibility of conflict between the 'holy roller' types. Just because someone looks like they have cooler powers, doesn't make their god(s) better. There's also the groups that work based on faith alone - God/their god(s) don't need to prove anything, that's because they're God/god(s) and without Him/him/her/them you wouldn't exist.
I have to be careful with that last part because I'm not writing this to insult anyone, though I may do some additional reading about why some beliefs are labeled as 'cults'.