Thursday, August 16, 2012
Review: The Falcon and His Desert Rose
The Falcon and His Desert Rose by George R. Lasher
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
I’m going to give this four stars for the premise and parts of the plot.
At times the story moved too fast to get a feel for the characters. I do enjoy characters that are neither white hat or black hat. Though Horus/Horace’s moral compass was a late bloomer due to the restrictive environment he was raised in, I hoped for better. More time with any of the three main characters should have added depth, rather than shadowing a superhero/villain relationship origin story.
The not-too-distant future was not well received. It may be because I don't care about reminiscing about any Red Sox victory, or the exciting advancements regarding cell phones and cars.
I would not discount the stars based on minor details, but I'm an obsessive type so there were some trivial things that caught my attention that should have been caught in editing. An average height woman does not weigh 78 pounds. If it was a mistake between kg and lbs, 78kg = 172#. I think the old adage should be adhered to - never inquire after a lady's weight. I also recall the mention of Safeway supermarket near MIT (Boston MA). I don't know why I focus on store names, but Safeway is not in the New England area, or even the mid-Atlantic. Some people are fickle about their grocery stores - like Alec Baldwin's mom refusing to move away from Wegman's.
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